For literacy we have been reading where the Wild things are by Maurice Sendak.
As part of our writing we wrote descriptions about a wild thing. Miss Percy. She showed us Several pictures of the Wild things. Here is my description of my writing, I was trying to use descriptive nouns and verbs, and interesting vocabulary. Do you think I have achieved my goal?
The Wild thing has glowing amber eyes with loads of white scales on its powerful legs. His razor sharp claws can shred through anything. His hair looks like a male lion’s mane. His tail sticks out like a raccoons.
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| illustrated by Maurice Sendak |
Kia ora Brent,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see you publishing something on your blog! I really like the use of the word powerful in your writing. I can see you have tried to use some interesting descriptive words, but I wonder if you could add more next time?
Hi Brent I’m Garv. i’m from May Road School I like your blog post about wild thing description. It reminded me about my lion research cause when you said his hair looks like a male lion’s mane.Next time can you put more information.Is there any more information about them.
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